https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQsQoxhzcBaMT5NEwHkAsnN8uydjJ2Gy8M9VeWIoBSE/edit

With my first framing sentence I only included one outside source so my Barclays formula was incorrect after being told I need to have two in the paragraph I was able to fix it which made my claim more valuable I believe because I had two resources instead of just one.